Saving Maria by D A Porter


Description: A man on the run with a girl he has just saved
Size: 32 KB ( ~ 6,068 words)
Type: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2007-05-13


Maria is a survivor, she hustles as a whore, until her best friend is killed by two very bad cops.

She witnesses the murder, and she knows she's next!

Maria runs for it, and she dives head first into our hero's car. From then on things get sticky, and our pair of escapees find themselves in Alaska helping out in a reservation as a husband and wife Schoolteachers.

The narrative has no spare words hanging around, but, still, the story flows remarkably well, and for once there's very little sex, but lots of action.

Enjoy!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10