Do Not Pass Go by LightontheSound


Description: Peter has just lost his job and things are going from bad to worse. He's tipsy and horny and there's a woman twenty years younger than him trying to get into his pants. Sadly, his marriage is about to end and that's not even the bad part.
Size: 151 KB ( ~ 28,634 words)
Type: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Cheating

Review by mbeau   [other reviews by mbeau]

Reviewed: 2006-01-12


This story has started off really well. In the first chapter there is alittle swerve, out of nowhere, but completely realistic with what happens later on in the story. The characters are very real and are going through real situations. They have things happening to them outside of the story that influence the story itself.

The writing is extremely well done and is very crisp and smooth. I look forward to reading more.

So far, in the first two chapters, there is no sex, although there is some teasing going on that is very well done.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10