This story has started off really well. In the first chapter there is alittle swerve, out of nowhere, but completely realistic with what happens later on in the story. The characters are very real and are going through real situations. They have things happening to them outside of the story that influence the story itself.
The writing is extremely well done and is very crisp and smooth. I look forward to reading more.
So far, in the first two chapters, there is no sex, although there is some teasing going on that is very well done.