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Author's Description:
The story of one young man's journey up to Heart Rock - the mystical wishing stone that grants those with the courage to reach it the power to choose one person they want to fall in love with them. For Ian Carrey, the journey was more important than the destination, and in the end he realized that it was meant to be that way.
Size: 36 KB (7,192 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Teenagers, Romantic, Fiction

Review by tendertouch   [other reviews by tendertouch]

Reviewed:


A wonderful, wonderful story!

The author has managed to bring to mind all of the stories I've ever read of someone overcoming adversity in order to find themselves. Then he puts a personal twist on it and wraps it all up neatly in the space of a short story. The main character appears to be part Frodo, part Samwise, part A. Clarence Shandon and a goodly part Smokey Barnable - all of that while still being a teenager.

No sex at all - nothing even vaguely erotic. You certainly have the feeling that there will be a lot of love in their future, though.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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