'A Dark and Stormy Knight' is a good story with a great twist. I don't want to give anything away, but I liked the way Mack wrote out the story for Tammer and Gavin. He did a good job of putting a range of emotions down on paper. He also did a great job of describing how an unsuspecting Tammer reacts to the shock.
The story, however, did have some strains in it. The initiation of the relationship between Tammer and Gavin could have been better developed.
The stroke parts were great, but they felt like a distraction to the story. This is mostly due to the way the relationship was built.
However, the way the story turns out is great. It is very good drama.