The Gift by Volentrin


Description: Story about a boy who discovers the ability to see past events. He finds out he has this ability when he is serving a detention in the eight grade. He is sweeping the girls locker room and wishes he could have been a fly on the wall, when suddenly a gauziness settles over his vision, and he can all of a sudden see the girls from a couple hours earlier! Follow along as he developes his new ability!
Size: 534 KB ( ~ 101,262 words)
Type: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Fiction, Time Travel

Review by The Old Fart   [other reviews by The Old Fart]

Reviewed: 2006-02-21


The Gift is Volentrin's best yet. Tom discovers that he can see the past as a young man.

As the story goes on, he finds that that's just the beginning of his abilities. He makes the mistake of letting a couple of friends know some of the things he can do and eventually finds himself on the watch-list of a secret society that operates above the law as well as being harassed by a government that knows what is best for him and his abilities.

As with all of Volentrin's works, the story is the thing. There are a couple of women but don't look for any wild sex scenes. It didn't seem to be wrapping up as well as I hoped as I neared the end, then I saw the note that said part two would be coming out. Good news indeed.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10