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Author's Description:
Trying to remove a cupboard a discovery was made of a portal from the 21st Century to the late 18th Century. Could this be where the last owner was shot? Charles decides to discover who the murderer of the last owner was and in doing finds a new partner.
Size: 201 KB (40,206 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Time Travel

Review by richardshagrin   [other reviews by richardshagrin]

Reviewed:


This is an older story I found by looking at authors whose names begin with A. It's a time travel story with lots of sex and violence. I liked it a lot. I am going to keep looking for more stories by this author.

The plot is fairly basic, with a cast of dozens, many of whom are women attracted to the hero. On my normal scale of six is a C, seven is a B and eight is an A, I am going to give this an eight. I saw no technical issues, homonyms or other problems, but nobody is perfect so I'll give it a nine, which is an A plus.

Appeal to reviewer is a high eight, but not high enough to be a nine. Its one of those hero with a ten inch cock stories and he is incredibly attractive to women of all ages. Not hard to enjoy when you are reading, but perhaps just a little hard on suspension of disbelief once you think about it. There is also a little gun porn, mostly involving very old weapons. Again, as long as you read the story rapidly there are no issues, just upon reflection I think TMI.

I recommend the story to nearly any SOL reader. I certainly am glad I read it, and I think most of you will like it too.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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