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Slightly prudish mum finds a new side to herself after a booking error on holiday
Size: 54 KB (10,762 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Drunk/Drugged, Lesbian, BiSexual, Incest, Mother, Son, Sister, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Water Sports, Exhibitionism

Review by The SlutMan   [other reviews by The SlutMan]

Reviewed:


Naked Holiday With My Mother is a hot little story about a freshly divorced mother and her son, who has just split with his girlfriend of three years, going on a vacation together to get over their respective break-ups.

But they made the reservations too quickly, and find themselves at a nudist / swinger resort, where things quickly heat up between them.

On their return home, Mom's bisexual sister is invited to join them, and things only get hotter from there.

dirty oedipus does a nice job with the story; the characters are fleshed out nicely, and the sex is pretty hot.

The only suggestion I could make would be for dirty oedipus to consider the services of an editor. There are enough mistakes in typing and punctuation to distract you from the story. (I'll admit I had to go back and look a second time for any errors during the sex scenes, they're that hot!)

dirty oedipus has crafted a sexy little story with this one, and it deserves a read, along with his other stories. Give it a look, you won't be sorry.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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