A Little White Lie by Cat5

Description: One lie leads to another; Now Jennie must pay the price.
Size: 57 KB ( ~ 10,809 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Oral Sex, Petting, Exhibitionism, Slow

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2007-06-19

In "A Little White Lie", we have the story of a young woman who tells her best friend a lie about a live-in boyfriend that she is on vacation with. Unfortunately for Jennie, her best friend and best friend's husband decide to stop by the vacation spot and visit. Now Jennie has to come up with a boyfriend. Will Rick be willing to help her out of that little white lie?

The sex in the story is tender and romantic. While arousing, the story wouldn't do nearly as well with a really intense sex scene, so the ones in the story work perfectly. This isn't a stroke story, so don't expect great stroke value.

The plot itself is great. One little white lie keeps getting compounded, pushing Rick and Jennie closer together. Jennie's friend and her husband are great characters, helping things along.

Technically, the story is very well written. The most I could do would be nit-pick over minor things, none of which impacted the story.

Overall, this is a very cute romance. If you enjoy a romantic tale with some sex properly mixed in, this one will do it for you.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10