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Obsession by Longhorn__07

Author's Description:
She knows he cheated. Paybacks are a bitch.
Size: 161 KB ( ~ 30,530 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Cheating

Review by mbeau   [other reviews by mbeau]

Reviewed: 2005-10-31

This is another excellent story written by Longhorn_07. It is in the vein of his other four stories, dealing with adultery and the consequences.

Overall, this is an excellent story.

<b>Warning, possible spoilers below</b>

For me, this one is a bit of a disappointment to read. The ending, well, leaves something to be desired. It almost seems that the story should be continued to a more meaningful resolution. Not necessarily the reunion of the husband and wife, but the resolution of a number of plot lines in the story that it would be nice to hear more about. The author's blog explains why the story ends where it does, but that doesn't help me with my feeling that it could have gone on a bit longer. Like I mentioned, not looking for a happy ending, but one that doesn't leave the reader wanting more.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7