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The TGI Chronicles: Part 1 - Too Late by GaryAPB

Author's Description:
This is the first part of a series about the lives of a group of young people who work for TGI (a company based in a small town in England). This part is about the troubles in the marriage of Tim & Beth.
Size: 394 KB ( ~ 74,714 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Cheating, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Slow

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-03-08

In this first installment of "The TGI Chronicles", we read about Tim and Beth's marriage falling apart after Beth's 3 months of infidelity. The problem is, Tim still loves Beth, and Beth desperately still loves Tim. The story is told from Tim's perspective.

Sexually, the few scenes are romantically strong, but not overwhelmingly intense. Based on the length of this story, there isn't much stroke value, but it isn't intended as a stroke piece. What sex there is fits the story well.

The plot itself is well done. The characters are believable. The dialogue between various characters is one of the strongest points, making the characters come even more alive on my monitor. The incorporation of Beth having a mild submissive side (there are no D/s sex scenes in the story) is almost hauntingly accurate.

Technically, outside of the differences between U.S. and British spelling conventions, there were a few minor errors. Nothing that ruined the wonderful immersion this story has.

Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. There is a second Chronicle in this series, and I am hoping we end up with a third or more!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10