Washed Up by Lazlong


Description: Ed Hill had a dead end job and a failed marriage. He figured he was all washed up, until he met a runaway who changed his mind. Then fate stepped in and changed everything again.
Size: 1127 KB ( ~ 213,713 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Science Fiction, Time Travel, Historical, Interracial, Black Female, White Male, Exhibitionism, Slow

Review by woodwiz   [other reviews by woodwiz]

Reviewed: 2005-10-27


An adventure, a love story, a story of people who put "the golden rule" at the top of their behavior laws.

Ed feels like a 25 year old looser until he meets young runaway Samantha who he helps and of course she helps him right back. They decide to take off on a cross country camping trip picking up young runaway Cassie on the way before a life changing event and a chance to bring a better life to many people they meet.

This story has a strong plot around good people helping others and of course finding love along the way. The situations are reasonably believable (but remember there is an SF code) and the writing is top notch both in expression and technical quality.

This isn't a stroke story at all. The sex is infrequent but well integrated into the plot and well written, expressions of love rather than just sex.

This reviewer has been reading the story from the start and looks for new chapters eagerly. I want to see what kind of unique situations the characters will get into and which new stray they will adopt. Strongly recommended.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10