That Sinking Feeling by Mack the Knife

Description: A Coghlandish sailor falls overboard in the frigid waters off of the Crystern Chain.
Size: 35 KB ( ~ 6,637 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Fiction

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed: 2007-12-27

Only Mack can turn a simple "Overboard" story into a stroke story.

As short stories go, this is good. In an amazingly short time you have disaster, relief, lust/love, consumation of lust/love, rescue and redemption.

Go Figure!!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10