A score of 6.65 (at the time of writing anyway) doesn't truthfully reflect the standard of Little Girl Lost. I'm not normally attracted to horror stories, but I clicked on this one just for the hell of it, and I'm glad I did.
If there is one basic fault, it's that 'Little Girl Lost' never reaches its full potential. There's much that could have been expanded upon, and, personally, I think the denouement could have been more protracted. This is one tale that could do with an extensive re-write.
Don't let that put you off though, the story is well worth reading in its current state. Its well written to the point that you can feel the tension that the main protagonists feel, the story is pretty atmospheric.
This is undoubtedly a good story.
Read, and enjoy!
PS: Just where did she get the military standard bra and panties?