A Mother's Mistakes by Gary Johns

Description: Allison's mistake leads to a taboo relationship with her son.
Size: 216 KB ( ~ 40,960 words)
Type: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Incest, Mother, Son, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Pregnancy

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2007-12-23

Allison and Bradley have been married for years, and they have been happy all of those years; and Chris is the son to prove it.
They both have wonderful jobs and can afford the luxuries of life.
Until, that is when Bradley suffers a devastating heart attack and the multiple bypass necessary to keep him alive. Regretfully the operation and the drugs needed to keep him alive also eliminates his libido, and Allison becomes a frustrated woman who embarks on a love affair to satisfy her hunger.
Anyway, enter Chris into the picture when he diccovers Allison's infidelity and secretly watches her fellate her lover, swallow his semen, and takes her lover up to her bed for a riproaring ass and cunt fucking.Chris's actions cause Mom to give up her lover, and slowly but surely Chris becomes her lover, and they fall in love with each other.
Now I freely admit that I'm a sucker for a good love story, and this is it in full measure.
Gary Johns has done an excellent job of unfolding the love life and it really becomes a stroke story and I only wish that the score could be increased to fifteen!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2007-06-20 - (Review Updated: 2007-06-20)

In "A Mother's Mistake", we have the story of Allison, a 38yr old mother that is having an affair with a coworker. She's very much enjoying being a slut, but her son Chris comes home unexpectedly one day, and catches her in the act with her lover. In a fit of anger, she slaps her son, then later tries to apologize. How will things work out?

The sex in the story was well done, with a great deal of tension between the mother and son building as they keep going one step further. The teasing and playfulness they show each other was well handled. There is some very good stroke value here if you enjoy mother/son incest.

The plot itself was well done. Many incest stories have little to no reason for the sexual escapades, as the family setting gives the author enough to work a relationship in. Gary Johns goes further in an effort to make their relationship more plausible.

Technically, there are a few minor errors, which didn't greatly detract from the story. A few missing periods at the end of a paragraph, and a misspelled word or two.

Overall, I liked this story. Mother/son incest stories aren't my favorite kind, but this was handled well.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9