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Clark Kent or Superman? by RPSuch

Author's Description:
When he catches his wife cheating, will he be the mild-mannered reporter or the man of steel?
Size: 50 KB ( ~ 9,481 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Humor, Cheating, Slow

Review by JustDan   [other reviews by JustDan]

Reviewed: 2011-02-28

RPSuch brings us a 'cheating wife' story that's head, shoulders and maybe a little bit of a beer belly above the rest out there. It's not all that complex, or long, but it's got good emotions, and a good ending in my book.

Barry, the husband in the situation, finds out his wife is cheating on him, and she gives him an ultimatum. She's not getting what she needs, sexually, from her husband, and it's only fair that she's fulfilled. He can just deal with that. Fairly formulaic, but it's nicely executed. What I love is Barry's response.

This is a creative twist on the genre, and its well-written. It's not entirely realistic, but within it's limits it doesn't call for too much suspension of disbelief. It's a very enjoyable read, and sent me digging through the rest of RPSuch's library.

There's hardly any graphic sex, but the story doesn't suffer for it. It's technically sound, and is very readable. A good job, overall.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8