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Author's Description:
Chad Johnson, a former assassin for the Clandestine Youth Agency, has chosen to leave the only home he has known for his entire life. However, adapting to and living a normal life is not as easy as it would seem as he discovers real friendships and, more importantly, love. Note: Appendices have mild spoilers, so please read up to their associated chapters before accessing them.
Size: 1661 KB (319,713 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, mt/Fa, ft/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Lesbian, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Humor, Incest, DomSub, Harem, First, Safe Sex, Oral Sex, Slow

Review by jason1944   [other reviews by jason1944]

Reviewed:


Interesting premise and backstory, but those really have almost no impact on the plot. Pretty well written, with the usual occasional spelling or homonym errors, but nothing overly distracting.

My only negative comment is that the story really should carry the Smoking fetish tag. The protagonist smokes cigarettes, and if I had been taking notes I could have tallied up every one of them. The author may not always mention food or clothing, but he makes sure to specify how many cigs are chain-smoked at each and every occasion.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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