Dumb Little Author Girly by Phoenix Arrow

Description: A very talented author just can't seem to get past the idea that she's quite the erotica bimbo.
Size: 14 KB ( ~ 2,655 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Fa/Fa, Reluctant, Lesbian, Humiliation, Anal Sex, Masturbation

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2007-02-06

In "Dumb Little Author Girly", we have the amusing tale of a female author that is plagued with poor technical skills due to her urge to get the story out to the masses. The humiliation that she suffers through as the emails come in complaining about her work fuels her masturbatory needs. However, she is hell bent on cleaning up her act. Can a fan help?

This story didn't have much stroke factor. The girl tells about getting herself off, but I just couldn't get into her masturbating over the mean emails. But that just may be me.

The plot itself was quite amusing. It appears that the author was also doing some healthy fun-poking at themselves, as previous works have been truly poor in the technical areas. The self-parody shows the author has a great sense of humor.

Technically, this story is pretty well written. Again, the author's earlier stories were, in my opinion, dreadful in the technical area. This story shows the author really did make an effort to clean it up and make it readable. They succeeded.

I found this story to be more amusing than arousing, and I admire the author's ability to poke fun at themselves. For that reason and the fact that it is funny, I recommend this story to everyone that has ever nit-picked a story's technical values.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8