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Author's Description:
A non-sexual story, orginally written under my "real" identity. This is in response to popular request to see my normal writings. Originally written and published in 1998. A tale of vengence after a horrible violation of a family member. No sex is described in this story. Don't say you weren't warned.
Size: 186 KB (33,623 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Caution

Review by Jim S   [other reviews by Jim S]

Reviewed:


This story is cold. Just like revenge is supposed to be best served. And it's a helluva read. Take the time. It's worth it.

Plot: N/A | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: N/A

Review by 54vette   [other reviews by 54vette]

Reviewed:


The old saying, "Revenge is sweet" really applies to this story.

Once again Al Steiner has proved why he is a master penman and storyteller.

For those of you out there who've ever experienced a real life horror such a rape, you will indeed enjoy this story even though it deals with such a vicious topic.

Although it's a work of fiction it is surely based on true/real life. We all know how the majority of the world treats stars and star atheletes. The "idol worship" that many practice tends to blind us to their real problems or issues.

Not all atheletes or stars of any kind have dark sides. A lot do very good things for their communities. However, there are those that tend to think they're "god's gift..." and feel they can do no wrong and/or get away with anything they want to. Basically your overgrown spoiled brat.

Al took that theme and put it together in an excellently written story.

This is definitely one of his best works to date.

Hat's off to you again Al. EXCELLENT STORY!!!

Enjoy!!!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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