Starting Small by Lazlong

Description: Jim was having a little bit of a hard time. He had been divorced for a while and had no new love on the horizon. Then he lost his job. Jim was a survivor. He started his own business, then he met Bonnie.
Size: 58 KB ( ~ 10,999 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Oral Sex, Slow

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2005-12-24 - (Review Updated: 2008-10-09)

Sometimes one has to let a story mellow in one's mind for a while, and then Laz's words just seem to become more enjoyable.

A simple theme, an engineer with principles loses his job over standards in the workplace, and he and a friend of the female persuasion get together and decide that the way to go is in partnership together. Works out just fine, and in the interim that spark of love enters into their lives, and who knows what will happen.

Now I keep on saying I'm a sucker for a good love story, and in my book this just fits the bill! Now I cannot truthfully say that this is in any way a stroke story... Sorreeee.


Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10