The Ugly One by Big Ed Magusson

Author's Description:
Some anthropologists once did a comprehensive survey of what human cultures considered beautiful. There was one consistent trait-symmetry. Every human culture in existence said that the person with symmetric physical features was the beautiful one. I'm the ugly one. This is my story of how I met a beautiful courtesan and what happened after. *Finalist, 2005 Gold Clitoride Award for best romantic story and for best heterosexual story.*
Size: 368 KB ( ~ 69,784 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Group Sex, Orgy, Safe Sex, Oral Sex, Petting, Sex Toys, Prostitution

Review by 54vette   [other reviews by 54vette]

Reviewed: 2005-01-06

I really enjoyed this story from the first chapter to the last. For the most part, I think many of us can relate to the 'hero' of this story in more ways than one.

Those of us who have no real 'ego' problem probably grew up with somewhat of a low self-esteem.

This story shows how one person's struggle with his physical, mental, emotional self can be overcome with the right 'motivation'.

The 'motivation' in this story comes in the form of a brothel prostitute by the name of Tamara who happens to live in the same town as our hero, John. She befriends him and even lets him into her personal/private life.

Eventually John becomes a big part of Lynn's (Tamara's real name) son's life as well.

This is where the story really starts to GROW!!!

This was (and is) a well written and well thought out story.
It never took things easy. It gave some serious life lessons to it's lead character. It also questions how we look at ourselves through these characters.

I got totally involved with the story and couldn't wait for the next chapter to be posted. And guess what folks? It even has a 'Happy Ending' to it.

Read this one! I guarantee it to please and satisfy the majority!


Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10