Sensitivity Training by Vulgar Argot

Author's Description:
Dr. Jolene Carmichael's newest patient, Marcus, is a young man to be reckoned with, and one who always gets what he wants. What he wants today is the good doctor herself.
Size: 27 KB ( ~ 5,120 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Reluctant, DomSub, MaleDom, Anal Sex

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2007-02-20

In "Sensitivity Training", we have the story of a therapist named Jolene who is dreading her next appointment with the demanding Marcus. He expects perfection in those around him, and isn't afraid to state his mind. How will this counseling session go?

The sex in this story is damn hot if you are into dominance and submission. There is no real bondage, other than the vocal aspect of "don't move" type commands. It is just pure mental and physical domination by one partner over the other. Since that is one of my favorite aspects of BDSM, I found this scene to be extremely hot.

The story itself is a nicely wrapped up little tale. You are given just enough information about the characters to make you understand them enough to enjoy what happens. That's a tough task in such a short piece, and the author pulled it off well.

Technically, the story is pretty well written. There are some formatting issues, probably because the story was originally written for another site, and not fixed to appear on SOL correctly. Also, the author was a little too free with the "<name> said" style when there were only two people talking. It just felt overdone. Other then those pet peeves, the story was excellent.

If you like domination, this story should really get you going. I highly recommend it.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10