Claire Converts by MWTB

Author's Description:
This is a side story off of Tired of Being the Nice Guy. When Claire discovers that her daughter was submitting herself to slavery, it sends her life off in a direction that she had not expected.
Size: 159 KB ( ~ 30,151 words)
Genre: BDSM
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, DomSub, MaleDom, Spanking, Light Bond

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2008-04-11

For someone on the sidelines Dominants and submissives are intriguing. How can anyone obey another without question or hesitation, even to the point of killing themselves to show their total submissiveness to their Master's demands. Oh yes, it has happened; but it is in the extreme. The more normal attitude is to accept the fact that, let us say, she is in utter fear of making a decision to the point of not being able to flush the toilet, or to buy a loaf of bread at the supermarket!

To discover a Master willing to accept this poor, emotionally disturbed waif as his slave in all things leaves her now able to confront her deepest and darkest fears and accept that the Master's order alleviates her from deciding the right or wrong of her act. She is now free from objecting to doing something that would otherwise be distasteful or physically damaging to her body.

So in MWTB's delightful story of a mother, Claire, who's daughter Becky falls in love with and submits to a Dominant Master, and subsequently marries him, and finds herself becoming herself a sex slave to her husband and friends, and realizes that she is in fact a true submissive, and luxuriates in her new freedom to become free. MWTB explores the emotional conflict that Claire goes through, and the realization by Jake her husband how serious it is to accept the responsibility for his wife's lifestyle changes.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by 54vette   [other reviews by 54vette]

Reviewed: 2004-05-15

MWTB has done it again. In the world of television this story would be considered a 'spinoff'. It's always a gamble to do sequels and spinoffs. However, MWTB did this one right.

His style of introducing not only his characters but, his audience into the BDSM lifestyle gives his stories a life of their own.

Claire is Becky's mother and as the old saying goes "the apple doesn't fall far from the tree", MWTB takes that old adage and applies it here to Becky's mother. And although that's an old tried and true 'line of thought' it works excelllently here.

Claire fights it internally. She doesn't want to become her husband's slave. Yet, her body continually betrays her when the situation arises or when confronted with her daughter's present lifestyle and existence.

The thing that makes this an even better story is that there is no big orgy scene or plot here. This story deals with one woman's perspective and her acceptance of herself. Her likes and dislikes. Questioning herself and the way she was to how she wants to be now. She wants to be so in control she's out of control so to speak.

You've got to love this writer. He puts his style to a BDSM story that not only makes it believable but, totally acceptable.

Enjoy this excellent story!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10