It Was Sexual from the Beginning... by GentleButFirm

Description: It almost finished before I realised.
Size: 36 KB ( ~ 6,827 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Voyeurism

Review by Finbar_Saunders   [other reviews by Finbar_Saunders]

Reviewed: 2009-08-05 - (Review Updated: 2012-06-30)

Short review this: Lovely.

Ok, slightly longer review. This was a really accomplished tale. It focuses on the surreal relationship between the central female character, Jo and an odd man, Danny, she spies whilst out walking one day.

The situation might be surreal, but the charge of sexual tension is almost palpable. GbF has managed to tap into a most sensual vein in Jo's narrative.

The dialogue, especially the brilliant interplay in their first few lines is wonderfully realistic.

Wonderful pacing and a beautiful finish. I recommend this one heartily, it's... lovely.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10