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For Corey, being a rock star is more fun than winning the lottery! And as wild as it is already, Amanda and her sister Cindy are gonna rock his world like never before!
Size: 1363 KB (253,264 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Mult, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Humor, Incest, Sister, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, Spanking, Rough, Light Bond, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Fisting, Sex Toys, Cream Pie, Size

Review by Pleasure Boy 1   [other reviews by Pleasure Boy 1]

Reviewed:


This is a review of what I've read so far - so far so great! The writing in this story is superb. This is what we read erotic stories for in the first place. wc63 has put together some amazing visuals, from a mind that obviously has an incredibly eloquent grasp on what's sexy. There is character, tension, hot steamy sex - everything you could ask for.

There were a few minor technical flaws, but they are very forgivable, compared to the quality of the stuff that does work. In fact, these are flaws that most people would not even notice, once the story has gotten them all wound up. It's a story in progress, so he has plenty of opportunity to shine it up even more.

Overall I give it a 10, with faith that the author will continue to wow us, as the forthcoming chapters are completed. It's well-worth the read.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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