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A Master's Ring by ElSol

Author's Description:
"Only something alive can die." by Natalie Goldberg
Size: 1538 KB ( ~ 291,650 words)
Genre: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Fa/Fa, Mult, Teenagers, Consensual, Incest, Brother, Sister, DomSub, MaleDom, Spanking, Rough, Light Bond, Harem, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Violent, School

Review by zimmm   [other reviews by zimmm]

Reviewed: 2011-04-04

One of my 5 favorite stories on this site and the ONLY one unfinished (hint, hint...)

A secret society exists where those with a superior will live as kings among their slaves.

Most BDSM stories (that even have a plot) are pretty similar. This is nothing like the others. The protagonist's childhood is horrible but he survives, though he might have a screw loose as a result. Mostly set in a University, the events are more adult (mature?) than you'd expect. I actually had a feeling of weight on my shoulders while reading this. With the exception of the aforementioned childhood, I deeply envied the protagonist.

You might notice the #9 for plot. I noticed a little hole or two on my second reading. They're nothing big, but after you've read "A Master's Ring" as many times as I have, the "suspension of disbelief" gets a little tricky.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by Tantalus   [other reviews by Tantalus]

Reviewed: 2006-07-09

Absolutely amazing! ElSol is well on his way to creating a masterpiece of epic erotic proportions. What can I say to express how wonderful this story is? I could tell you how wonderful the writing is, but I won't. I could go on about how hot the sex scenes are, but that would be a waste of time. The only thing I can say that properly conveys my appreciation for this piece is that I read it TWICE... back to back! a MUST read!!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by 54vette   [other reviews by 54vette]

Reviewed: 2005-02-08

I predict that "A Master's Ring" will be classic in years to come.

This is one hell of a story and is written so well it's just incredible.

ElSol has taken some time tested elements and put a story around it that rivals any of the best stories you could read ANYWHERE. Even in mainstream. I wonder if he's got any movie offers for it. It's worthy of the big screen for sure.

"A Master's Ring" is a sophisticated tale of a man who grew up in an orphanage and had no knowledge of his family history. He was 'adopted' by a boy that was a couple years older than he. But, you really don't find out all these things right away.

David grew up to become a deadly person in life. He's not a psychotic or a serial killer. In fact, he's an older college student. (VA Benefits) But, there have been "forces" working to lead him to his destiny. Oh's good from the first chapter!

ElSol weaves his story with complex intricasies that begs for you to pay close and careful attention.

It's orchestrated like a Mozart composition. Going from delicate flute lines to thunderous tympani segues back to mellow string lines that keep you fastened to your seat, yearning for more.

You'll grow to love this awesome book. ElSol has put together an incredible cast in this story and he makes sure we're never bored with any of them. In fact, he makes us want to meet them and be part of this world he's created for the main character, David.

Great stuff ElSol.

Read this one, you'll find yourself wanting MORE and MORE!!!


Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10