Strange Bets by Neo

Author's Description:
It's a story of losses : first, Mum loses her bet; then, I lose my virginity; then she loses her husband. Story with a happy ending.
Size: 43 KB ( ~ 8,154 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Incest, Father, Daughter, First, Safe Sex, Pregnancy

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2007-12-18

This is a rather sad story, I think. A young daughter, a virgin, is the brunt of a wager between her mother and father as to whether she is a virgin. And the discussion becomes one of how to determine her sexual "innocence." So, it is finally decided amongst the three of them that Daddy should examine her vagina with his fingers to feel if her hymen is intact. So now we come to the sad part. When the true state of her virgo intacta status events are set in motion that change the family forever, and even though the expected breakup does not totally occur there is regret evident in the behaviour of them all.

But at the same time there is happiness also in the love for the daughter for her father in a far deeper way than normal. Regretfully there are only two examples of Neo's work available this stand alone and a collaboration with JayBee.


Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10