Paul Phenomenon should teach a class on how to write an intriguing sex story. As far as the psychic aspect of this story he's got a hold on exactly what he wants his character to be. I strongly recommend that everyone read the original "Flights of Conciousness" story first in order to get an idea of who David Stanley (our hero) is. Paul's works are well known throughout the erotic story community. So, I'm humbled in being able to give my opinion of this author. I've not only read his free stories, I've actually purchased one from another site. It was worth it. Great reading. His handling of all the taboo issues that his character deals with is just superb. He's one author that will leave you wanting more.