Alice by Friar Dave

Description: his sweety's busty roomie comes on to him...and educates him
Size: 36 KB ( ~ 6,827 words)
Type: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Interracial, White Male, Oriental Female, Oral Sex

Review by JustDan   [other reviews by JustDan]

Reviewed: 2011-02-28 - (Review Updated: 2011-02-28)

Friar Dave gives us a nicely written short story with a twist at the end. In a nutshell, the protagonist falls for Alice, a very petite young lady. This is relevant because the protagonist is a self-described 'tit-man' (God bless him), but love is blind, as they say, and he's completely committed to Alice, despite the fact that Alice's best friend is an impossibly stacked sex kitten.

At this point, the formula would lead you all to believe that hijinks would ensue, and you'd be right, but it's not quite the way the normal script would dictate. The main character is more realistically moral than most in erotica, and the whole story comes to a satisfying close.

The sex is there in this story, but the foreplay is far more prevalent. Plenty of groping, mental stimulation, and things of that nature, but it's not a stroke story by any means. Well done, overall, though.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7