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Dangerous Assignment by Gary Johns

Author's Description:
Macarthy Winslow agrees to protect a friend's wife and daughter. He knew it would be dangerous but never guessed where the danger would come from.
Size: 199 KB ( ~ 37,736 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Cheating, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2007-12-24

Mac is a Security Expert, the best in his field. Some years ago a group of crooks sabotaged his car and killed his wife and unborn baby. Naturally he went to pieces, and if the Judge hadn't stepped in to take charge no one knew what would have happened. But he did , and because the Judge was Mac's deceased fathers best friend, a bond was formed that lasted til the present time.

When the Judge married a very young pregnant woman most people thought it was just a dirty old man 'thing'; but Mac saw how much the Judge really loved Angela, and her baby girl, Tess, and Mac seeing how they all flourished together loved her and the baby also.

Every time he would visit his surrogate father and the mother and daughter he would bring a stuffed toy for the child. And Tess kept those toys as a shrine to the man she loved and whom she decided would take her virginity.

Mac and Angela had a small coupling when Angela became too frustrated because the Judge could no longer perform, and Mac, dismayed at what he had done stayed away from his adopted family for some years.

Mac was forced to return when the Judge's wife and daughter were threatened by the crooks on trial for their lives, and Mac was called in as the Security Expert to protect them from being killed.

Immediately after saving their lives, and the crooks were found guilty, the Judge collapsed and on his death bed begged Mac to take care of Angela and Tess, knowing full well what has transpired between them. So he does.

Enjoy this excellent love story as much as I did as the love story unfolds, and the two women choose to share Mac's love.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 5 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-04-18

In "Dangerous Assignment", we get the story of Mac, a retired Special Ops and police officer that runs a security company. He is hired by his longtime friend and mentor, an elderly judge with a much younger wife and a 18yr old daughter, to protect them from a possible threat by the criminals of the case the judge is trying. Fortunately or unfortunately, the mother and daughter have designs on Mac. Angela, the mother, has always desired Mac, and since her husband cannot really have sex due to health concerns, she is very ready and willing. Jess, her daughter, saw her mother and Mac be indiscreet years early, and now wants her chance.

The sex in this story was very well done. There was an incredible amount of teasing done by both women, and it really made the sex scenes intense. I could literally feel Mac's sweating it out each time one of the two women started to tease him. Seduction in sex stories always seems to add some extra zing to the couplings, and Gary Johns did an excellent job here.

The plot itself is nicely done. Mac's reason for being there and the friendship with the judge are all pretty basic stuff. The plot comes out well because of the lengthy process the author uses in the seduction of Mac. More than anything else, this story is about that seduction.

Technically, there weren't any obvious flaws, and so the story flowed smoothly.

All in all, this is a very hot sex story with enough plot to make it plausible without it getting in the way. If you are into seductive, teasing sex, this one should smoke your socks off.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10