Tutor by Horace Baldwin

Description: This is a modern fairy tale between two college virgins. She liked literature but was pushed into studying Computer Science by her dad. I was a computer maniac who didn't even know how to flirt. This story adapts a very slow build.
Size: 149 KB ( ~ 28,255 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, First, Slow, School

Review by tendertouch   [other reviews by tendertouch]

Reviewed: 2007-10-05

Charming! That's a reasonable one word review of this story.

Juan, the narrator, moved to the United States with his family when he was 15. Unfortunately his grasp of English leaves something to be desired. Fast forward a couple of years and his English has gotten good enough that he's able to hold his own in college and his abilities as a programmer are superb. His social skills, though - particularly where they relate to the opposite sex - are somewhat stunted.

Stephanie is in the computer science program as well - but under protest. Her love is English literature. Hmmmm... Her social skills are certainly better than Juan's but, for whatever reason, she's still pretty inexperienced.

The pleasure of this story is the journey as two college virgins break out of their shells.

Minimal actual sexual content but there's a fair amount of sexual tension.

Technically it comes off as a story told by someone for whom English was not their first language. The phrasing can be a bit stilted and the sentence structures are not always complete. That's not a problem, though - it's part of the charm. The story really sounds like it's being told by someone who has to work hard to put words that the reader will understand to what he's experiencing.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9