Mistress Watching by Tallorder64

Author's Description:
Ed Hanson screws up a private detective job and helps a minister's daughter out of a jam. He stumbles onto a corrupt city administration.
Size: 160 KB ( ~ 30,341 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Rape, Blackmail, Heterosexual, BDSM, Humiliation, Gang Bang, Interracial, Slow

Review by Bobster   [other reviews by Bobster]

Reviewed: 2010-01-18

Nice read, was a little herky jerky in places, but overall a great effort!

I truly enjoy a story where the good guy wins and helps others out in the process.

The plot was well done, and moved along realistically. In this story you follow Ed, a private investigator, ex-cop, that discovers corruption and murder.

Along the way he helps several women that were taken severe advantage of, and actually appears to find his own love interest!

All in all a good read!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9