Amnesia by Tallorder64

Description: Carol finds a naked man tied to a tree and near death. She nurses him back to health and they try to find out who did that to him.
Size: 79 KB ( ~ 14,981 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Slow

Review by sjowg   [other reviews by sjowg]

Reviewed: 2016-02-21

You've seen this setup before: man who has no memory and is in distress is discovered by woman; woman nurses him back to health; they fall in love; they set about finding out why he lost his memory and getting him back to his rightful place in the world.

All in all, it's a good story. Those who like a bit of mystery, action, and violence will be satisfied. Oh, and there is some sex in there.

It's not great literature: the author has problems with punctuation, homonyms (you're/your, etc.) and spelling (arraigned vs. arranged). In some places the paragraphs are a mess, and when they are it's hard to keep track of who's speaking. If you can look past those issues you'll likely enjoy it.

The author (if he is still writing, no posts on SOL for years) needs to find a good editor.

My bottom line: it's good, not great.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 6 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2005-11-18

I keep on writing this, but I'm a sucker for a good love story, and this is definitely one!

A widowed veterinarian on an isolated Ranch sees a murder taking place. She rescues the victim, who is close to death, nurses him back to health, and slowly cures his amnesia. Together, with the help of his dead father's secretary/lover they solve the mystery of whodunit, and live happily ever after. Slightly low on the sex scenes, but not overdone just for the sake of a fuck or two. I think its worth a download and a second or third reading.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10