Jill and her brother Jim discover more about themselves than they planned on when they start surfing together.
Size: 52 KB (10,612 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Heterosexual, Incest, Brother, Sister, First
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed:
In "Going Online With Jim", we get the story of a set of fraternal twins that both love to chat and talk about sex. With the help of an online friend, Jill ends up having more than just some risky chat time with her brother, Jim.
Sexually, the story has carefully created build-up as Jill and Jim go from simply chatting to full blown incestual intercourse, while on a webcam. The tension was excellent, and this is definitely stroke material if bro/sis incest floats your boat. As long as that isn't a major turn-off, the sex is well done.
The story itself is pretty simple and to the point. It is told with both the normal narration of Jill's point of view, and excerpts of her chats with both Tammie and Jim. The combination works well to help craft that sexual tension.
Technically, the story is pretty solid, but there is a spot where the word BOOKMARK shows up in bold. This is probably left over from some editing. Also, the original copy of this I saw had the various chat voices in different colors, making it a LOT easier to read. I think the colors are stripped out by SOL, which is a shame. Lastly, since those segments ARE chat, the author uses no capitals and "chat grammar", which is a bit painful to read, especially in all black.
Overall, I have always enjoyed this story, and Kelly027 is one of the best bro/sis incest writers there is. She makes the stories believable, and it is a true shame that she hasn't posted anything in over a year. If you like incest, check her other stories out.
I highly recommend this story.
