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Author's Description:
This is the first story I wrote. When my friend Beth and I had lunch together, she told me her husband had a crush on me. Me!
Well, I had to check that out, didn't I?
Size: 52 KB (10,351 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Cheating

Review by Kalkor   [other reviews by Kalkor]

Reviewed:


A nice romantic cozy with a strong element of wry, self-deprecating humour.

That's not my usual style, but i appreciate a well-constructed story quite a bit.

Plotwise, I liked the manner in which the story is anchored in the Real World, with concrete details of what the characters are doing mundanely during the pre-sexual maneuverings. ((And it's nice to know who Baby Doe was, for the first time, after passing a restaurant named after her for years.))

I'll try a couple more by the same author, I think.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 5
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