Play Helen For Me by dangermouse1314


Description: Jack is asked to fuck his brother's wife. Will Helen stick to her part of the agreement?
Size: 25 KB ( ~ 4,741 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Slut Wife, Cuckold, InLaws, Light Bond, Oral Sex

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2005-12-04


In "Play Helen For Me", one brother is approached by his sibling with a strange request: Make my wife pregnant, as I cannot. After a few drinks, an agreement is made.

This relatively short story was pretty well done. The light bondage and submission games the brother and his sister-in-law play are done pretty well.

The only nit-pick I really had with the story was the artificial insemination information the low sperm count brother gives. Artificial insemination is a pretty boring and easy procedure, and there would be no risk associated with doing the procedure. Even In-vitro (IVR) is safe. So, that reason for why the one brother had to help the other wouldn't hold up.

The sex was pretty good, and grows in its description with each successive act over the course of 3 days. (Should have been 5 to be more reasonable. That, or have had the doctor give the woman a medication that causes the ovaries to release the currently prepared egg. Can you tell this reviewer and his wife went through this process? UGH!) The light BDSM was well handled, showing that the author has at the very least read up on the subject.

I would have loved to see a sequel to this story, as the light BDSM was looking like it would keep growing, as the sister-in-law was getting into this. Unfortunately, it appears the author isn't writing anymore. Too bad, as this one was pretty good, and showed promise.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9