Rental Property by JiMC

Author's Description:
Bobbie's husband has been laid off, and they are finding it difficult to make ends meet. Bobbie decides to ask a co-worker for a loan.
Size: 56 KB ( ~ 10,619 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Fiction

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-05-05

In "Rental Property", we have the story of a young man that comes to an agreement with a slightly older newlywed to help her and her husband pay their bills. For $800, he buys her clothes, but lets her keep them. She "rents" the clothing's use by giving him small sexual favors.

The sex in the story is limited to touching and oral. However, it is well played out, making for a fun time. I wouldn't call it hard stroke, but it was fun.

The plot itself is really fun. If you've ever had one of those moments where you are feeling tongue tied around a girl/guy, and suddenly blurt out something semi-outrageous, and then they take you up on it, you will have a feeling about how this story reads. The newlywed woman is charming, and the young man is fun in his eager awkwardness, as well as noble in protecting her marriage.

Technically, there were no errors that I spotted.

I enjoyed reading this one. It brought back many fond memories of those times where my mouth has blurted something out before my brain engaged fully, which was a good thing as I was too shy to be suave. That combination of a bold or challenging statement/question and shy/embarrassment at said boldness worked wonders on way too many women for me to believe! This story felt like those encounters. Thanks for those rekindled memories, JiMC!

This story is cute. It isn't super-stroke. It's more of a subtle seduction. I enjoyed the teasing quality it used, and I recommend it as a light stroke story.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9