Better? by Losgud

Author's Description:
Everybody is feeling romantic after the wedding.
Size: 80 KB ( ~ 15,170 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Incest, Brother, Sister

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-04-03

In "Better", we are treated to the entertaining tale of Tony coming back to his parent's house to attend a distant cousin's wedding. In the process, he has to deal with his sister, Janine, who is feeling frisky after the wedding.

The sex in this story is a lot of fun. It's also hot, if you like incest stories. Janine's attitude about the whole thing is great, as it leaves Tony wondering what hit him. There is definite stroke value here, but I found the story itself to be better than the sex.

The plot is great. Tony, Janine, and their parents all feel kinda like my family feels, minus the sex angle. The bickering between siblings, the parents weird behavior patterns. The whole story feels like a tongue-in-cheek sex story, and it works really well.

Technically, the story has a few errors in it. It feels like something either happened in the posting, or the edits didn't take hold. They weren't enough to jar me out of the story, but only because the story was so damn fun to read.

I've said before, I believe, that I enjoy Losgud's stories. He does a really good job of writing about brother's that feel put upon by their families, and sisters that make things all better. His humorous tales always seem to make me grin, and the fact that the sex is hot feels like icing on the cake.

I highly recommend this one, if you like incest stories.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9