A short story of a young college girl working her summer break at a campsite. She stumbles into a chance encounter with a young teen, and elevates him into manhood. In the process, she herself finds new delights.
Size: 48 KB (8,943 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed:
In "The Lifeguard", we have the story of a young college aged girl that is stuck helping her aunt out at a nearly backwoods vacation spot. Missing both boys and sex, she stumbles onto a young man whose bathing suit is stuck at the bottom of the pool. How will she handle this situations? Read along to find out.
The sex in this story was quite hot. The author does a nice job of building the girl's tension up to the point that you can almost feel her sense of urgency. This story makes great stroke material.
The plot itself is a nice twist on a slightly older woman helping out a boy just blooming into manhood.
The technical quality was quite poor. There were numerous misspellings and typos, and comma use was quite bad at times.
With a better technical effort, this story would rate a solid 9 for me for overall appeal. I have always stressed technical quality as being important, and the lack of quality turns what could have been a really nice story into only slightly above average.
If you are looking for a short stroke piece and don't mind weak technical efforts, this one works very nicely. If technical quality matters, it may hamper your enjoyment of this story.
