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The continuation of the story of Legacy. Please read The Ministry of Fire, Part 1 before beginning this. Part 2 picks up right at the cliffhanger ending of Part 1. Ryan sets off to stop the war between the Ministries of Fire and Water. With the help of his friends in Squad 99, he confronts a corrupt nobleman called Lord Gregory who set the two Ministries against each other. However, his greatest threat comes in the form of two mysterious Goblin assassins working for Lord Gregory.
Size: 1060 KB (196,600 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Teenagers, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Fairy Tale, High Fantasy, Humor, Superhero, Science Fiction, Aliens, Extra Sensory Perception, Robot, Space, Paranormal, Magic, Revenge, Royalty, Violence

Review by Ivellius   [other reviews by Ivellius]

Reviewed:


The return of the chaotically determined fun hero in training. And now it's even more evident that he's destined for greatness, even if his friends still think he's too inexperienced and just another grunt.

Here we see evidence of that greatness, but still, he's troubled by the past and has some problems with authority too. And it gets even more difficult when the girl he likes seems to only have eyes for another.

Ryan seems to be getting a better grasp of the right time to be serious and when to be the jokester. Unfortunately, his timing is not as perfect as another character's timing for butting in and ruining everything.

This one really has some heartbreaks and tears but it also has laughs and the determination of someone that never gives up on his mission or his friends.

If you've read the first part, don't just sit there, continue reading!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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