A Good Days Work Deserves Its Rewards by Zak

Author's Description:
A visit to a hotel ends with a nice suprise or how to get a good review
Size: 18 KB (3,879 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Stroke Story
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, True Story, Masturbation, Oral Sex

Review by Mythic Shadow   [other reviews by Mythic Shadow]

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The receptionist in a hotel manages to bump up the review the hotel receives through excellent customer service.

I thought the story had a good plot and that was probably the best part of the story too. The tag said that it was a stroke story, but 'much sex' seems more fitting.

On the technical side, this story needs work. There were a lot of simple mistakes that even Word's spelling check would have caught.

I liked the story, but the sex in it was a bit repetitive and could use editing to make it better. With proper editing I would easily score it a 9 for appeal.

Overall, it was decent story, but it didn't reach its full potential.