Obese, anxious, obsessive, and clear-eyed about his prospects as a bureaucrat in a crumbling galactic empire, Pyotr flees in hope of finding a better life. Perhaps his misery is the empire instead of him. Whatever the case, he will be given the opportunity to learn the answer.
Size: 444 KB (82,360 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Magic
Review by Jetcrash747 [other reviews by Jetcrash747]
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"Spaceships are overgrown buses without the windows," Pyotr Kaminitzky grumped as he sat in the belly of the aged hulk. The opening sentence of the continuum evolution and advancement of humankind. A man sought improvement in a society where the strong and wealthy controlled everything. Pyotr Kaminitzky Is such a man, just a common number cruncher in a world of equally qualified number crunchers. A large man was running into a completely new life of number counting or waddling as quickly as an overweight person attempts.
While en route to his new home, something happens, suitcases collide with the spacecraft. Unexpected situations create a new role for Pyotr. The lifeboat rescued him, or did it?
After enduring life in the microcosm of a spaceship, he spends countless times unaware of what is happening to him. Being stranded in a lifeboat, only to crash into the middle of a desert! What can he do with no water, food, or anything else?
The adventure of one man seeking fulfillment in a new situation. What can he do? How does Pyotr survive? Blue Hand is the story that captured my imagination and sense of adventure. A tale worthy of spending time reading.
Fick Suck has created A story of excitement and daring in the ever-expanding world of space hi-adventure.
Review by olddave1951 [other reviews by olddave1951]
Reviewed:
I put off reading this story. Thought it was about a blue handed Jabba the Hut like creature. But when I gave in, I found a excellently written sci-fi piece that reads well. So far, the characters are human but it who knows? Also various strange wild beasts running around, after all they are not on Earth.
Give it a read, it is well worth the time.
The characters are well developed as are the unfolding events. Dialogue is well done with proper punctuation. Errors are few unless I missed them. Plot and appeal both rate 10. Not qualified to rate the technical.
