Dawn by Thinking Horndog

Author's Description:
My buddy Zack has a new -- well, from the sound of things, 'girlfriend' is stretching the description some. Frankly, I expected a fat bottle-blonde with fourteen tattoos and at least eight piercings, straight from a trailer-park -- but that wasn't what he introduced me to...
Size: 47 KB ( ~ 8,913 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fiction, Oral Sex, BBW

Review by pj   [other reviews by pj]

Reviewed: 2017-09-03


TH comes through, again!

A relationship-rebound short story that hits the mark, perfect in pace and tone and every way that counts. Short on descriptives of the ensuing fucking but, geez, we've all been there and can fill in the blanks.

The important thing is the protagonist gets his girl by just treating her like a human being and recognizing her real qualities. And still 'playing by the rules'. After her initial experiences with his buddy, the hero would need a crowbar to get her off his dick.

What could be better in a short story?! It's so good I'm sending it to Sarah.. she loves happy endings where the good guys -and girls- get the 'Big O' prize, even after fifty years. ;)

pj

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9