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Unending by Reluctant_Sir

Author's Description:
When you are the grievously wounded, sole survivor of a terrorist attack and your life is turned upside down, how do you move on?
Size: 752 KB ( ~ 142,601 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Fa/Fa, Mult, Incest, Harem

Review by RabbiRabbit   [other reviews by RabbiRabbit]

Reviewed: 2016-12-15

Thank you Reluctant Sir, I had a wonderful day reading this story, tempered by my innate grouchiness.

The bad:

Typos, typos, typos, and they got worse in the last few chapters.

Bemused is not a synonym of amused. However, since it is now seemingly an official SOL policy that bemused must be over used I am amused, if not bewildered. (I am also bewitched and bothered; I know there is a song in here somewhere.)

Gun choice:

He has one arm, a semi-automatic, even with your explanation of how he could rack it, he could not do it fast enough, even if it is a Glock 30. A hammerless revolver with 38 Special hollow points would be much easier to the song says, Sticks and Stones can break my bones, but hollow points expand on impact.

The good: Characters are interesting, the story is all too realistic in some respects and that makes it a better story. The babes, like all babes on SOL are ...babes.

The excellent:

About 140,000 words dropped on us innocents at SOL all at once.

My judgment:

One of the best introductions to a long a novel on SOL. And if it is going to be a stand alone story then it is a fun read with interesting and diverse sex which is not overdone and plenty of plot and interesting women.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10