Gary Cooper by MysteryWriter


Description: A big city police sergeant retires and starts a new life on the mountain. A life he had no idea would happen to him.
Size: 225 KB ( ~ 42,667 words)
Type: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa

Review by Derek Smith   [other reviews by Derek Smith]

Reviewed: 2016-11-21


This is a story which leads the reader along quite slowly and gently but in a rather satisfying way. The plot is a little sketchy in places but overall it is an entertaining read.

The end just isn't! It doesn't end, it just finishes. We, the readers are left standing at the edge of the cliff. "What happens next?" we scream. I do hope that Mr. Writer will take pity on us and write Part 2. I will certainly read it if he does.

Please Mr. Writer, don't keep us waiting too long.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7