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Two Loves, One Lover by Renpet

Author's Description:
Love is impossible to measure. Science cannot explain it. It's ethereal. It can be complex and confusing and sometimes painful. It can also be joyous and fulfilling and wonderful. Experience is the only way to appreciate its astonishing power. For one man, love transcended all in a most unusual way. (Adult male/14 year old girl)
Size: 286 KB ( ~ 54,234 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Fiction, First, Safe Sex, Oral Sex, Petting, Slow

Review by manddscott   [other reviews by manddscott]

Reviewed: 2016-09-28

It took me 3 days to read this story, not because it is extremely long, but because I have been working 2 jobs and about 80 hours a week. That leaves very little time for my favorite pastime, reading. I used to read at night before falling asleep, but find that these days I can simply lay down my head and be asleep in less than a minute. I managed to login to Sol 3 days ago and noticed this story have been posted. I decided to try and read it quickly, only to find that the first two chapters were much longer than expected.

This is a story of romance, and a little bit of Supernatural mixed in. The love of a man's life passes away at a relatively young age, and is reborn. 14 years later, she finds his way back into his life. Is it fake? Is it destiny? Whatever it is, do not read the first chapter unless you expect to bawl your eyes out. The pain is palpable.

For plot, I give this an A (8). It skims over much that could be, but fills in most of the gaps nicely.

For technical score, an A+ (9). It was virtually error-free.

For appeal, another A+ (9). Well done again, Renpet.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9