Twitch by Kris Me

Description: Dale has to get his life back in order after a nasty accident at work has left him a paraplegic. His one bright light is his live-in career.
Size: 98 KB ( ~ 18,584 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Fiction, White Couple, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Slow

Review by Xalir   [other reviews by Xalir]

Reviewed: 2016-08-13

Twitch is the story of the main character's road to recovery after waking up in the hospital terribly injured. It's a very pleasant store with its own charm and wit. It takes place in Australia but could as easily have been dropped into any place in the world without more than a change in some of the slang. Very easy to read and very easy to enjoy.

From a technical standpoint, there were a few missing words in the early going and a couple of pronouns that needed changing ("he" needs to be changed to "his" in a couple of sentences), but overall, the story flows, the dialogue feels natural and the pacing is good.

I really enjoyed the story and strongly recommend it to any and all.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9