Not This Time by aroslav

Author's Description:
A DoOver with a twist. You know the formula, right? Old dude gets sent back in time to his 14-year-old self where he becomes the world's greatest lover of 14-year-old girls, becomes fabulously wealthy through his wikipedic knowledge of the future, and solves the world's problems? Not This Time.
Size: 441 KB ( ~ 83,627 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Fa/Fa, Fa/ft, DoOver, Polygamy/Polyamory

Review by RabbiRabbit   [other reviews by RabbiRabbit]

Reviewed: 2016-08-11

We all know how doovers work: person wakes up in a young body and remembers: who won the Triple Crown and when; exactly how the Hunt Brothers tried to fix the silver market and when; when the Miami Dolphins had a perfect season; and World Series winners for X number of years. Not This Time.

And the person sent back has a penis, a cute sister who he generally gets to fuck, and if it is a different mom then his actual mom, he gets to fuck her too. Not This Time.

This is aroslav's second doover and like the first one, it breaks the basic doover rules. If nothing else it deserves to be read just for those elements.

Of course with aroslav's editorial team the typos and grammatical errors are pretty much non-existent. So kudos to them.

A word to authors, and I do not know if this can be done on SOL: if you plan on a few opening chapters that are mold breaking, turn the scoring off for a few chapters.

Is this aroslav's best work? No. Is it well worth the time to find out what a more realistic doover looks like? OK, that is a really stupid question, a realistic doover is an oxymoron. Did I enjoy reading this? Yes. Did I stay awake to finish it ? Are you fucking kidding me? I don't even stay up late for Seth Meyers, and I think he is really funny. Where was I? Oh yeah, the score for this story is way too low; it is a "Great Story."

One more question and then off to sleep. arolsav, when do we get the next "Hero" story?

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10