What? by RichardGerald

Description: This is a second part to the story When. It continues the characters into married life.
Size: 49 KB ( ~ 9,292 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Humor, Slow

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: 2016-05-20

RichardGerald has created a love story in two parts, "When" is the first story and "What" is the story for this review.

You meet Greg Shelley in a romantic situation with his new wife Patty-Ann Shelley. Greg is a typical nerd in every way possible, a nerd with a severe inferiority complex who always is waiting for the other shoe to drop and his wife to go to greener pastures.

The story revolves around this issue and the surprising ending. I recommend reading "When" then jumping right into "What" they are well written with a tremendous amount of fore thought going into the stories, well worth the effort of spending time reading.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10