A Helping Hand by Janet Fremont

Description: Chris discovers a girl looking like her world is ending. He offers a helping hand - which helps them both. Romance, not sex in this one.
Size: 68 KB ( ~ 12,895 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic

Review by sjowg   [other reviews by sjowg]

Reviewed: 2016-04-03

This is a straightforward romance. It's not a stroke story, so if you're looking for that, look elsewhere. The story is about a "white knight" who helps a young woman in distress; and, to quote the Julia Roberts character in "Pretty Woman", she rescues him right back.

Technically it's well-written. There are no holes in the plot, but there are a couple of typos and errors in the language; those are not big enough to get in the way of enjoying the story.

I thought the character development was good (for a short story, of course; this isn't a novel), the story engaging, and overall found it quite appealing. I recommend it.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9