Don't Blame Me! by Omachuck


Description: Women never noticed him. Never, not even his own mother. Then the Confederacy decided he had a talent that they desperately needed. The Office of Targeted Extractions got involved. Things changed. You will get much more from this short story if you've read other stories in the Swarm Cycle.
Size: 44 KB ( ~ 8,344 words)
Type: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Fa/Fa, Fa/ft, Consensual, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Science Fiction, Harem, Polygamy/Polyamory, Black Female, Oriental Female, First, Oral Sex, Petting, Slow

Review by Vitruvian Manuel   [other reviews by Vitruvian Manuel]

Reviewed: 2016-03-28


Ok, I don't usually read short fiction, but this is one of the funniest things I've read in years.

I'm skipping the good/bad/final format for this, because there really isn't enough story to justify that, but I had to speak out about this story. The only downside I can find here is that it doesn't stand alone. There is no story that is a mandatory pre-read, but familiarity with the swarm cycle is required for this to make much sense. If you're a sa'arm fan, this is a must-read.

Have fun.

--Manny

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: 10